I NEED criticism.

DaisukeKenji · Post by **DaisukeKenji** » Tue Aug 29, 2006 1:48 am

Coming from someone who works in a comic book store...I think spidey's head looks out of place. Where's his neck, and how can he have his head turned like that? Other than that, I think the hair's weird for him. Everything else looks fine. The highlight on one of Arana's shoes looks too white. On the positive side, it still looks a lot better than some of the crap I've seen at work.

Post by **Snape** » Tue Aug 29, 2006 9:46 am

Coming from someone who works in a comic book store...I think spidey's head looks out of place. Where's his neck, and how can he have his head turned like that? Other than that, I think the hair's weird for him. Everything else looks fine. The highlight on one of Arana's shoes looks too white. On the positive side, it still looks a lot better than some of the crap I've seen at work.I can see your point about his neck/head position, it does seem a bit unnatural. But Mus didn't draw it so can't criticise him for that!

ErBSMoKAh · Post by **ErBSMoKAh** » Tue Aug 29, 2006 10:23 am

Did spiderman get hit in the head or something? Or did he just go with the "You can sorta see me" style mask? opting to go with the inverted batman look is kinda hawt.Oh yes colour looks nice, though colours kinda freak me out too.. i mean ahhhhhh!

Post by **Kamm** » Tue Aug 29, 2006 10:34 pm

Coming from someone who works in a comic book store...I think spidey's head looks out of place. Where's his neck, and how can he have his head turned like that? Other than that, I think the hair's weird for him. Everything else looks fine. The highlight on one of Arana's shoes looks too white. On the positive side, it still looks a lot better than some of the crap I've seen at work.I can see your point about his neck/head position, it does seem a bit unnatural. But Mus didn't draw it so can't criticise him for that!When Sid pointed it out, I tried moving my body into a position like that.. It's.. Not easy..

Post by **Step** » Tue Aug 29, 2006 10:37 pm

Coming from someone who works in a comic book store...I think spidey's head looks out of place. Where's his neck, and how can he have his head turned like that? Other than that, I think the hair's weird for him. Everything else looks fine. The highlight on one of Arana's shoes looks too white. On the positive side, it still looks a lot better than some of the crap I've seen at work.I can see your point about his neck/head position, it does seem a bit unnatural. But Mus didn't draw it so can't criticise him for that!When Sid pointed it out, I tried moving my body into a position like that.. It's.. Not easy..stop before tib reads this, he might try to do the same with that old body

Post by **Kamm** » Tue Aug 29, 2006 10:39 pm

Coming from someone who works in a comic book store...I think spidey's head looks out of place. Where's his neck, and how can he have his head turned like that? Other than that, I think the hair's weird for him. Everything else looks fine. The highlight on one of Arana's shoes looks too white. On the positive side, it still looks a lot better than some of the crap I've seen at work.I can see your point about his neck/head position, it does seem a bit unnatural. But Mus didn't draw it so can't criticise him for that!When Sid pointed it out, I tried moving my body into a position like that.. It's.. Not easy..stop before tib reads this, he might try to do the same with that old body :oops:Oh, I stopped after I nearly separated my neck from my spine.

CrazyTom · Post by **CrazyTom** » Tue Aug 29, 2006 11:48 pm

the coloring on her pants looks weird to me

QuidBoy · Post by **QuidBoy** » Tue Aug 29, 2006 11:54 pm

vagina

Post by **Original** » Wed Aug 30, 2006 2:53 pm

vaginahmm...

Post by **Jordan** » Thu Aug 31, 2006 12:32 am

Coming from someone who works in a comic book store...I think spidey's head looks out of place. Where's his neck, and how can he have his head turned like that? Other than that, I think the hair's weird for him. Everything else looks fine. The highlight on one of Arana's shoes looks too white. On the positive side, it still looks a lot better than some of the crap I've seen at work.I can see your point about his neck/head position, it does seem a bit unnatural. But Mus didn't draw it so can't criticise him for that!When Sid pointed it out, I tried moving my body into a position like that.. It's.. Not easy..stop before tib reads this, he might try to do the same with that old body :oops:Oh, I stopped after I nearly separated my neck from my spine....are you Spiderman?