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ok lets see how this goes down :P
Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 7:11 am
by vull
i posted this limerick on another forumbut didn't get a good response solets see what y'all think :Pthere was an old rabbi named kiethwho circumcised men with his teethit wasn't for leisureor sexual pleasurejust to get at the cheese underneath !!
Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 7:18 am
by Musashi
*golf claps*
Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 7:48 am
by JaketheJew
Are leisure and pleasure supposed to rhyme? because they don't.
Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 8:40 am
by vull
Are leisure and pleasure supposed to rhyme? because they don't.lolclose enough !!(and no disrespect to ur faith man)
Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 9:23 am
by Snape
I like it! =D> Pleasure and leisure do rhyme but sound too similar... maybe change it to this:there was an old rabbi named kieth who circumcised men with his teeth it wasn't to treasure the sexual pleasure but to get at the cheese underneath !!
Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 10:00 am
by vull
*author unknown*i wouldn't dream of altering someoneelses work of literary genius !!anyone else got a limerick??
Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 2:12 pm
by Jordan
I like it! =D> Pleasure and leisure do rhyme but sound too similar... maybe change it to this:there was an old rabbi named kieth who circumcised men with his teeth it wasn't to treasure the sexual pleasure but to get at the cheese underneath !!How do you afford your rock 'n' roll lifestyle?
Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 4:53 pm
by Snape
It's a hard knock life.
Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 6:43 pm
by JaketheJew
Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 8:34 pm
by Anubis
leisure and pleasure do rhyme...but like snape said they sound almost identical...